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Alright, I’ve been wanting to make a GalFormers fic for a while and I finally got the guts to do it!  So, here it is XP  I made this for Raimyu cause she wanted to read an OpxBee fic ^-^  

These are the GalFormers Names ^_^v Raimyu of course has the final say, but this is what I thought of/found

Melissa = Bee (It means bee in Greek)
Skye = Prime (It was pretty)
Rose = Ratchet (My brain died while thinking)
Jazze = Jazz (I’m unoriginal)
  Tetsu = Iron Hide  (It means Iron in Japanese)

Warning: there will be relationships between 2 girl's in this fic.  You have been warned


Chapter one (Yes, there will be chapters, that means that this is a continuous story)


Skye ran through the school, her long blue hair trailing behind her.  Her dark eyes scanned the hallways, looking for the tell tale sign of blonde that was supposed to be coming out of Biology any moment now.  This was Melissa’s first class of the day and Skye wanted to surprise her by waiting for her there and escorting her to second period.  This was mainly because Skye came to school late and missed her in the morning AND because she had noticed that some of the guys in the school had been eyeing the cute blonde for a few days now.  She wanted to show them that she was unavailable and would be for a very long time.   Skye slowed down and leaned against a row of lockers by the door as some of the students started to file out.  One by one she watched them leave and she slowly began to frown.  She took a peak inside the class room and found that Mel wasn’t inside.

“Was Melissa absent today,” she asked a random student who walked out of the door.  The girl looked at Skye and shook her head.

“Melissa was called out of class by a guy and hasn’t returned yet,” she told her before she started down the hall.

Called out by a guy… then where was she?  Skye frowned again before turning on her heel and running in the opposite direction that she had come from.  Her Mel was with a guy… right now… by herself… “Wait until I get my hands on him,” she growled, her eyes narrowing.  

‘Of course’, she thought as she turned a corner and saw some stairs.  ‘I have no right to be acting like this.  Mel isn’t mine… at least not officially.  Everyone knows that we care for one another, we just haven’t yet to voice it.’   Skye ran up the stairs to the roof and opened the door, catching a glimpse of the blonde hair she had been searching for.

“Mel,” she called as she jogged over the girl.  Melissa turned around at the sound of her name and a huge smile spread over her face as she saw her best friend coming over to her.  

“Hey Skye,” she said as she waved at her, her blonde hair peeking out of the kitty hat she had bought the other day at the store.  “You’re not wearing the hat I got you…”

Skye sighed and ran a hand through her hair and stood next to Mel.  “And you left with a random guy today, what was with that?”

Mel blushed and looked away, “I’ll tell you when you finally wear your hat.”

“I’m not wearing that hat,” she countered, a smile on her lips.  “So, who was he?  Should I be concerned that he is going to be stealing my little bee away from me?”

Mel turned away and the bell rang, signaling the start of the second class.  “I need to get to class Skye,” she said with a smile.  “See you at lunch.” She quickly ran down to the door and opened it, running down the stairs as fast as her short legs could.

Skye frowned again and sat down, looking up at the endless blue above her.  “Why didn’t Mel tell me… I was just joking with her.  Unless there really is something going on and she isn’t telling me.  What if that guy asked her to go out with him…”  A smirk appeared on Skye’s face and she laughed as she took out a note book and started to write some things down.  “This should help,” she said as she continued to write.  “If Mel wont tell me, I will just find out for myself, and I wont wear that hat.”  ‘It will stay at home where no one else can see it… it’s mine, she gave it to me and me alone.’  

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Mel made it to class a few minutes late and was scolded by her teacher before she was able to sit down in her seat.  She took out her supplies for the non stop writing they were doing and was waiting to start.  The teacher wouldn’t read it for a few days so Mel would have time to replace what she was going to write with something else on a later date.  For today though, her mind was on one thing and one thing alone.  She smiled and began to write, her blue eyes sparkling in mischief.  


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Aright, this is a pretty okay beginning I think… opens up the plot, I got Bee and Prime in there… and I have things to work with  ^_^  There are references to Raimyu’s picture’s in there as well *points to the hat convo*

That’s all, I am going to go work on chapter 2 now.
©2008-2009 ~kanakage34012
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Author's Comments

Um, this is for :iconraimyu: She wanted an OpxBee fic so I decided to make her one with the GalFormers ^_^ This is only chapter one... and my chapter ones are normally short, sweet and to the point. Hence why it is short sweet and to teh point. It gives room for building ^_^

Anyways, what do you think?

chapter 2 -> [link]

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:iconraimyu:
Whoaa... *is scared* Skye is acting a lot like me irl :faint:

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♥ *OPxBee ♥ ~HidexRatchet ♥ *ProwlxJazz
:iconkanakage34012:
Lol O.o weird. Should I keep it that way or should I change it?

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In every heart of every person, there lies a darkness...how they control it is up to them.



"I invoke the act of ARTISTIC LIBERTY!" - Jamie Brewer in her attempt to intelegently make an excuss for her laziness.
:iconraimyu:
Haha, no, I like it! <3

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♥ *OPxBee ♥ ~HidexRatchet ♥ *ProwlxJazz
:iconkanakage34012:
Then I shall keep her as is ^_^ how about Mel? was she to your liking?

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In every heart of every person, there lies a darkness...how they control it is up to them.



"I invoke the act of ARTISTIC LIBERTY!" - Jamie Brewer in her attempt to intelegently make an excuss for her laziness.
:iconraimyu:
I just hope there was nothing between her and that guy O_o;
But I like that name ^_^v and others' names too <3

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♥ *OPxBee ♥ ~HidexRatchet ♥ *ProwlxJazz
:iconkanakage34012:
Don't worry, nothing like that will happen on my watch ^_^
Thanks ^_^ it took me a while to find them @_@ Babynames was overwhelming lol

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In every heart of every person, there lies a darkness...how they control it is up to them.



"I invoke the act of ARTISTIC LIBERTY!" - Jamie Brewer in her attempt to intelegently make an excuss for her laziness.
:iconsprx77katosei:
cooooooool its a fanny ficy from raiymu. ithink bee and skye are gonna make out from the sounds of it

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im a number 1 hyperactive knuckle headed ninja
if you dwell on the bad memories then what good are the good ones when they turn bad!!
i like :pokeball::pokeball:
"silence is golden but ducttape is silver!"
:iconkanakage34012:
Lol, well, you will have to wait and see about that XP I'm glad you like the fic so far ^_^

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In every heart of every person, there lies a darkness...how they control it is up to them.



"I invoke the act of ARTISTIC LIBERTY!" - Jamie Brewer in her attempt to intelegently make an excuss for her laziness.
:iconsprx77katosei:
yeah they seem perfect for a ....... uhhh you know!

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im a number 1 hyperactive knuckle headed ninja
if you dwell on the bad memories then what good are the good ones when they turn bad!!
i like :pokeball::pokeball:
"silence is golden but ducttape is silver!"

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